[freenet-dev] [freenet-cvs] r11837 - trunk/apps/new_installer/res

[Dave Baker]

On Sunday 18 February 2007 20:10:27 nextgens at freenetproject.org wrote:
> Author: nextgens
> Date: 2007-02-18 20:10:26 +0000 (Sun, 18 Feb 2007)
> New Revision: 11837
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>            <p>You can also run <abbr title="A message boards 
program.">Frost</abbr> which may have been installed; there may be an icon on 
your desktop otherwise have a look at Freenet installation directory.</p>

I'd suggest, "...Frost</abbr>, if you chose to install it. There may be an 
icon on your desktop. Otherwise, have a look at Freenet installation 
directory.</p>"

(ie. tell the user under what circumstances it may have been installed, and a 
few grammar corrections.)

>          </div>
>  
>          <div class="infobox">
>            <div class="infobox-header">Next, connect your node to the 
network.</div>
> -          <p>You will need to get some <abbr title="Darknet is the primary 
network on Freenet.">darknet</abbr> (or testnet) connections. If you know 
people using Freenet ask them for their noderefs (this is ideal) otherwise 
please join us on IRC on <a 
href="irc://irc.freenode.net/%23freenet-refs">#freenet-refs</a> on 
irc.freenode.net, and we will get you wired in to the network. Note that you 
are especially vulnerable to your peers so if you are paranoid you should 
only connect to people you trust.</p>
> -          <p>To create a link with another node, send them your <a 
href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/myref.txt">noderef</a> and add theirs on 
the <a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/">darknet</a> page.  When <b>both 
ends</b> have added the other's noderef they should connect.  If you are 
having difficulties refer to the <a 
href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org/FreenetConnections">Freenet 
Connections</a> page on the Freenet Project Wiki.</p>
> +          <p>You will need to get some <abbr title="Darknet is the primary 
network on Freenet.">darknet</abbr> connections. If you know people using 
Freenet ask them for their noderefs (this is ideal) otherwise please join us 
on IRC on <a href="irc://irc.freenode.net/%23freenet-refs">#freenet-refs</a> 
on irc.freenode.net, and we will get you wired in to the network. Note that 
you are especially vulnerable to your peers. If you are paranoid you should 
only connect to people you trust.</p>
> +	  <p>To create a link with another node, send them your <a 
href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/myref.txt">noderef</a> and add theirs on 
the <a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/darknet/">darknet</a> page.  When <b>both 
ends</b> have added the other's noderef they should connect.  If you are 
having difficulties refer to the <a 
href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org/FreenetConnections">Freenet 
Connections</a> page on the <a href="http://wiki.freenetproject.org">Freenet 
Project Wiki</a>.</p>
>          </div>

Also, should all this gumf about making connections not go before we talk 
about browsing freesites and running frost?


>  
>          <div class="infobox">
>            <div class="infobox-header">Once again thank you for using 
Freenet!</div>
> -          <p>The Freenet Project employs a full-time developer to produce 
this system.  If you can, we would appreciate it if could <a 
href="http://freenetproject.org/index.php?page=donate">donate to the 
project</a> so that we can continue to employ him.</p>
> +          <p>The Freenet Project employs a full-time developer.  If you 
can, we would appreciate it if could <a 
href="http://freenetproject.org/index.php?page=donate">donate to the 
project</a> so that we can continue to employ him and keep on improving our 
software.</p>
> +	  <p>We wish you a pleasant experience in the free world!</p>

Something along the lines of:

"Remember, Freenet is all about freedom of speech, so you may find content on 
Freenet that would be considered offensive or unacceptable in other media. If 
this concerns you, then consider carefully what links you trust."

.. probably wouldn't go amiss either.

>          </div>
>        </div>
>      </div>
> -    <div id="copyright">&copy; Copyright 2007 <a 
href="http://freenetproject.org/">The Freenet Project</a>.</div>
> +    <div id="started">
> +	<a href="http://127.0.0.1:8888/">Get started on Freenet!</a>

I assume there's some kind of mechanism to replace this if the installer chose 
a different FProxy port?

Other than that, seems good to me, although I'm only reading through the HTML 
source right now.


Dave